Thursday, June 24, 2010

Students' Works on Paragraph

Paragraph by Student 1:

Education for the poor determines the nation’s future in three sectors. The first sector is human resource development. Education helps the poor to develop their knowledge and skill which enable them to compete in global era. The second sector is economic development. Once we have a better human resources the better we build an economic foundation for the nation’s future. The last sector is the opportunity for the government to give an equal chance for the poor, which makes education possible for all in the future.


Paragraph by Student 2:

Increase in fuel price will influence some economic aspects. It will influence transportation cost, which in turn will influence prices of all primary needs. If prices of all primary needs rise, it will cause/trigger a higher inflation, which in turn / eventually will burden people’s lives.

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