IELTS-Writing task 2 (page 31)

Nowadays, the air pollution is getting worse. It is very difficult for us to get good guality air in public areas. One of many pollutants is the cigarette smoke. So, I state that smoking should be banned in all public places.

Firstly, some researches prove that inhaling cigarette endangers people’s health. The smoke does not only cause some bad effects to the smokers’ health but also to the nonsmokers’. The researchers discover that the effect of inhaling cigarette smoke is even worse to the nonsmokers. The smoke can cause many health’s problem such as cancer, inflammation of the lungs, etc. It is also dangerous for pregnancies.

Secondly, we need legal standards to make healthier environment. By forbidding smoking in public areas, we can get fresh air to breathe. It is the government’s authority to ban people smoking in public places. In Jakarta, this kind of regulation has been made. People are not allowed to smoke in public areas, such as offices, shopping centres, and parks. Anyone who disobeys this rule should be punished to pay fine.

In addition, the individual awareness is also needed to get healthy environment. The purpose of banning people smoking in public areas can be seen by obeying the rules. The smokers should be aware that other people deserve fresh air to breathe. Without people’s awareness, the goal of the regulation cannot be achieved.

In conclusion, I would maintain that smoking should be banned in public areas, because of its danger for human’s health. In order to have better environment, the government role is needed to produce legal standards. Besides that, we also need people’s participation to be aware about this, so that we will have healthier environment to live.

Erni

star a business

1. survey about our stregth, weakness, oportunity and threat (swot)
2. recruite some employer
3. make some promotion and sale our product
4. make an evalution about the income and our plan/steps

When we have willing start a business, we must have some plan to trace in several steps to get success. Firstly, establish a business, we must know our capability and capacity. It contents four variables, streght, weakness, opportunity and threat. Strenght and weakness are variables from inside enterpreuner and the other side, opportunity and threath are variables from outside entrepreuner. Examples of strength and weakness are compare our capital with our outcome that we needed, looking for information about the product and how to sale it (distribution). The variable of opportunity such as sourvey about peoplr or customers most want and need included in opportunity. The variables of threath, for examples branch mark the price, product, place and promotion from our competitor.

Secondly, to make our job easily, if we think necessary, we can recruite some employer,. After that, we can make some promotion to make people know and interest to our product to buy some. Than we can evaluate our works by measure our income to get sustaining improvement steps in our business.(FISKA)

Fried rice

There are some steps in making fried rice. First of all, the ingredients are prepared. They include rice, some vegetables, such as: carrots, or you can choose anykind of vegetable you like, meatball, onion, salt, sugar, chilli sauce, ketchup. Secondly, after all the ingredients ready, turn on the stove and then a frying pan is prepared upon the stove. After that the oil is put into the frying pan. Next, the onion is also put into the frying pan. Wait for about two minutes before we have all the spices into the frying pan. The next step is all the spices above, salt, sugar, chilli sauce, and ketchup is put into the frying pan. They are all mixed until it smells very nice. After this, put the vegetables and meatball at the same time. Wait for about two minutes and finally we can put the rice into it. Do not forget to make them all mixed. Then wait for about two minutes, and ultimately it is ready to be served.

Erni Agustin

the greenhouse's work

The diagrams show how a greenhouse works.
The greenhouse's work is divided into three stages.
Firstly, when the sun shines into the greenhouse, the greenhouse will catch the sunlight and keep it.
Secondly, the sunlight which kept by the greenhouse will produce the heat and the heat will go to the up of greenhouse.
The last stage, the heat which go to the up of greenhouse will go back to the down and up again continuesly and go through back to every sides of the greenhouse.
The function of the heat that produced by the greenhouse is to make the plants stay in the warm condition and do not get the influnces from the climate changing.

ZENDY'S

manufacturing process

The diagram, shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing. The stages, start from the procurement of raw materials and manufactured component. The first process will be the storages. Next step will be production planning, this step, contained with product research and design the product based on the raw materials.
After that, the process will be assembly, directioned with inspection and testing process. After testing process, the next process will be allocated to the market research, which is related to the design process, in order to market research, the process also including the advertising.
After the packaging process, the product will be despatched.
The last process of manufacturing, is sales process. Sales process also related to the market research process and the early process, production planning.


rosa

Model of a chronological essay

One often wonders how an aircraft gets off the ground and flies. A simple series of aerodynamic processes enable an airplane to take off the ground. First of all, the airplane starts moving down the runway, picking up speed. As it is picking up speed, the air stream moves quickly past its wings. The wings, which are flat on the bottom and bulging on the top, splits the rushing air into two different movements. The air flow under the wings moves slower than that over the wings, building up upward pressure on the bottom surface of the wings. As the plane reaches the top speed on the runway, around 280 kilometers per hour, the pressure of air under the wings becomes strong enough to lift the craft to the air. The plane’s nose looks up, and within seconds the entire aircraft is airborne. The plane has taken off, climbing higher and higher until it reaches the cruising altitude.

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cements

This is the rough essay and the main idea for my take home test:
1. Intoductory paragraph
For this paper, I would like to write about cements....
2. Definition of cements
As all you now, cement is a material that very important to strengthen house, school, office, street construction, and other buildings.
3. The history of cements, who the inventor
The first cement has been found in Portland,....
4. Some kinds of cements: white cement, portland cement,...
5. The use of cement based on its purposes and the condition, example: for bulding near the sea, we must use speciall cement, named....
6. How to make each of the cement
7. Summary

Writer: Yenny Lopolusi

Daily sales transaction is also called market basket in retail company can increase unlimited. These data will be data tomb, of no use to the enterpreneur if these data only saved, not using to produce some usefull information. There emerged a need for extracting the hidden knowledge out of data. It is difficult to manipulate a large number of data with the limited human ability. This situation led to development of data analysis technique with computer system.

Market basket analysis is a technique that uses to find which items were often purchased together. Input for this process is one period of sales transaction and ouput from this process is list of items were often purchased together. This result can be used to layout selling catalogue or to promote item.


Susana Limanto

HOW PARENTS FOSTER LIFE SKILLS IN YOUNG CHILDREN

How to handle difficult children

How to handle difficult children

Difficult children are children who have behavior problems like irritate, interrupt, argue, opposan, play to truant, lie, say vile words, have cruel attitude, and the other like
Generally, those children can't be accepted and adjusted in their environment. Moreover they can often get intimidation from parents, teacher, or other people.

3 topics ?

Web Design : Between Fascinating Multimedia Design and Usability Issues

1. Introduction : the history of www.
-> Purpose
-> The first www
-> The stages of web
2. New multimedia technology
-> The history
-> The advantage
-> The problem
3. Usability issues
-> The history
-> What and Why ( the definition and the importance )
4. The battle between multimedia and usability
-> The multimedia side
-> The usability side
-> How to deal with both side
5. Conclusion

Multi Level Marketing : To Be Banned or Not To Be
1. Introduction
-> Purpose - the first MLM
-> History of MLM
2. Pros :
-> Advantage
-> The down side
3. Cons :
-> The argument on Ponzi scheme
-> The law on some countries
4. What should we and the law do about MLM ?
5. Conclusion

Discipline Your Child : Love or Evil ?
1. The mind of a child -> when it started to understand the situation ?
2. Pros :
-> Advantage
-> The down side
3. Cons :
-> Advantage -> the loving theory
-> The down side -> the evil stuff
4. How to discipline with love ?
5. Conclusion

A Student's Work on Writing Task 1 IELTS

The chart shows the average numbers of hours per day spent on household tasks by both males and females of different age groups in the UK during the period 2000-2001.[because the time period is sometime in the past, we mostly use past tense]

Generally, the length of time both sexes spent on household tasks increased as they got / grew older. It also indicates that women spent more time on household tasks in each age group. [This is a good description of the general trend in the chart!]

The youngest age group of both sexes spend spent under one hour on household tasks. The amount of time increasesd about an hour in later age groups. [be careful with the expression ‘about an hour,” because for females in the age group 25-44, clearly the increase was more than one hour]

In the age group of 25-44, Wwomen spent about twice as much time on household tasks as men did, by the age of 25-44. Then it remained steadily in later age groups, while the amount of time men spent on household task increasesd.

(published by Patrisius, originally written by Sujayadi, a participant of IELTS Prep Course)

Model of Argumentative Essay on IELTS Writing Task 2

Recently, scientists worried about climate change have urged governments to introduce measures to reduce the greenhouse gas emissions that are seen as its main cause. Simultaneously, politicians and environmentalists have urged individuals to make changes to their lifestyle. I shall argue that governments and individuals should take joint responsibility for this problem [core of the argument].


Firstly [signal for the first argumentative point], industry accounts for a large proportion of the greenhouse gas emissions, and this can only be controlled by government action. Measures could be taken to discourage pollution, such as limiting or taxing the use of fossil fuels. Alternatively, subsidies could be offered to industries to clean up their production processes. If these ideas were adopted, I believe that businesses would regard pollution as a financial issue.

Secondly [signal for the second argumentative point], only discussion between governments can ensure that solutions are successful. The Kyoto agreement, for example, tried to reach global agreement on how to address the problem. Without such co-operation, it seems to me that efforts to reduce fuel consumption are unlikely to be effective.

However, national and international policies will only succeed if individuals also [signal for the third argumentative point] change their lifestyles. For example [signal of examples], people could think more carefully about how they use energy in their homes. By using less electricity, installing energy-efficient light bulbs and electrical appliances, or investing in solar panels, individuals can make a real difference.

In addition, [signal for the next argumentative point] I think individual attitudes to transport need to change. Instead of making short trips by car, people could choose to walk, cycle, or take a bus. Since cars are a major source of the problem, changing our behavior in this area would have a major impact.

In conclusion [signal for concluding], I would maintain that only a combination of international agreements, national policies, and changes in individual behavior will succeed in preventing further damage to the environment.

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