Wednesday, February 21, 2007

Fried rice

There are some steps in making fried rice. First of all, the ingredients are prepared. They include rice, some vegetables, such as: carrots, or you can choose anykind of vegetable you like, meatball, onion, salt, sugar, chilli sauce, ketchup. Secondly, after all the ingredients ready, turn on the stove and then a frying pan is prepared upon the stove. After that the oil is put into the frying pan. Next, the onion is also put into the frying pan. Wait for about two minutes before we have all the spices into the frying pan. The next step is all the spices above, salt, sugar, chilli sauce, and ketchup is put into the frying pan. They are all mixed until it smells very nice. After this, put the vegetables and meatball at the same time. Wait for about two minutes and finally we can put the rice into it. Do not forget to make them all mixed. Then wait for about two minutes, and ultimately it is ready to be served.

Erni Agustin

1 comment:

Ubaya Language Center said...

Bu Erni, this is a clear process of how to make a dish. But since IELTS emphasizes the use of passive voice, you should write the next task using passive sentences. For example, "First of all, the ingredientas are prepared. They include spice, meatballs, etc. Second, a frying pan is prepared upon a stove" etc.

The word "later stage" is not properly used in your draft.