Wednesday, February 21, 2007

manufacturing process

The diagram, shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing. The stages, start from the procurement of raw materials and manufactured component. The first process will be the storages. Next step will be production planning, this step, contained with product research and design the product based on the raw materials.
After that, the process will be assembly, directioned with inspection and testing process. After testing process, the next process will be allocated to the market research, which is related to the design process, in order to market research, the process also including the advertising.
After the packaging process, the product will be despatched.
The last process of manufacturing, is sales process. Sales process also related to the market research process and the early process, production planning.


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1 comment:

Ubaya Language Center said...

Your opening sentence is good, but just drop the comma after the subject.

You can actually describe the process by following the stages on the picture. "First, the raw materials and manufactured component are kept in the storage. Secondly, some production planning takes place. Then, the products go to assembly stage. Once they are completely assembled, the products proceed to inspection, where they are checked for defects. Next, they undergo testing stage, where they are tested for qualities and reliability. Afterwards, they are sent to packaging section, where they are wrapped in strong packages. The packages are then sent to despatch section, where they are delivered....".

Notice the passive voice used.