Wednesday, February 21, 2007

star a business
  1. survey about our stregth, weakness, oportunity and threat (swot)
  2. recruite some employer
  3. make some promotion and sale our product
  4. make an evalution about the income and our plan/steps

When we have willing start a business, we must have some plan to trace in several steps to get success. Firstly, establish a business, we must know our capability and capacity. It contents four variables, streght, weakness, opportunity and threat. Strenght and weakness are variables from inside enterpreuner and the other side, opportunity and threath are variables from outside entrepreuner. Examples of strength and weakness are compare our capital with our outcome that we needed, looking for information about the product and how to sale it (distribution). The variable of opportunity such as sourvey about peoplr or customers most want and need included in opportunity. The variables of threath, for examples branch mark the price, product, place and promotion from our competitor.

Secondly, to make our job easily, if we think necessary, we can recruite some employer,. After that, we can make some promotion to make people know and interest to our product to buy some. Than we can evaluate our works by measure our income to get sustaining improvement steps in our business.(FISKA)

1 comment:

Ubaya Language Center said...

Bu Fiska, your essay contains too long discussion on the first point, and considerably shorter discussion on your second point. So, you have to make a balance. Tell directly what is the first step in establishing a business. Drop long examples on this part, and after that, move quickly to the second point.
Also, pay attention to your vocabulary; some of your words are simply inappropriate (e.g "content).
Take your time to finish this essay with the comments that I make above.